A struggle in my Memory

Safwat · **مرسل:** السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 2:58 pm

A struggle in my Memory

You migrated my rare heart and soul
But you are invading my active memory
You bequeathed it a big cruel haul
So it becomes not sad and not merry
Do you regard my feeling as dead as a doll?
And you injured my memory without being sorry?

You started with me with your soft words?
But then you became fond of your invented odds
I think we were too close to each other
So we slotted the heavy rocks by our little fords
But you made these fords go separated shores
And your crazy ideas were more harmful as swords

I feel that sentimentality mocks at us now
Because we ignored frankness and dashed it out
Our near houses became like struggling towns
And you still have nothing but craziness and shouts
One day you will see your tongue as a rusty saw
When your loving misled people will run out

Everybody may commit many faults
Unfortunately, you were my fault
But these faults are teachers
And we are still running like the colts
And we are still enough strong against bolts
But I and you are in love with our thoughts

My memory likes the time in which we started
But it is obliged to forget you at last
And it is not happy because you parted it
But we can solve our problem and cast
Remember that I confessed and talked
And remember always that past is past

Lina · **مرسل:** السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 6:14 pm

Safwat,

اقتباس:

You started with me with your soft words?
But then you became fond of your invented odds

I advised you ..But you didn't listen to me

:mrgreen:

Safwat · **مرسل:** السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 7:57 pm

اقتباس:

I advised you ..But you didn't listen to me

Could you please tell me what you mean?

G.H · **مرسل:** السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 8:01 pm

You are a talented poet indeed . Go on
God be with you

Lina · **مرسل:** السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 11:08 pm

Safwat,

I'm sorry I was just kidding

Safwat · **مرسل:** الأحد سبتمبر 09, 2007 8:43 pm

[quote]
You are a talented poet indeed . Go on
God be with you
[/quote]
G.H,
Thanks so much [quote]
I'm sorry I was just kidding
[/quote]
Lina,
Thanks and it is kind of you to apologize ..so I accept but could you tell me about your opinion about the poem .

مرح · **مرسل:** الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 12:24 am

your poem is so effective
It touches me an makes me feel sad and Idon not know why

your abililty to write poetry is a great gift from Alaah
go on SAFWAT

اقتباس:

And remember always that past is past

You are right

Adnan · **مرسل:** الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 12:29 am

اقتباس:

your abililty to write poetry is a great gift from Alaah

مرح,
that is right
god bless you my brother
adnan

Lina · **مرسل:** الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 3:39 pm

Safwat,

you don't need my opinion Safwat cuz you know it..
you know that I'm one of your fans

it's great

Safwat · **مرسل:** الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 8:45 pm

[quote]
your abililty to write poetry is a great gift from Alaah
[/quote]
Allah
Thanks MARAH

[quote]
god bless you my brother
[/quote]

[quote]
I'm one of your fans
[/quote]
iT IS MY PLEASURE

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