An Art... in my Heart

Safwat · **مرسل:** الخميس أكتوبر 27, 2011 11:33 pm

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I have an art in my heart
Saves your joyful name
In every sacred part

It pushes my eyes
To miss your eyes
And to endure its darts

Your beauty never stops
And year by year,
It does not vanish,
Nay , it really starts

When this art meets you
in music,
I know how music is smart

It calls me to take you
To dance beyond imagination
To give you a nation
In which you color the moon
And you color the soul
And you color the stars

Safwat[/align]

Ranaa · **مرسل:** السبت أكتوبر 29, 2011 12:14 am

Fine Safwat

Frankly, the title is musical, and it attracts the reader to know your "Art"…
You've used simple wrods, but they are full of meanings and pictures. You've said "Imagination", this is so effective…do you know why?
Imagination is the best place to live your dreams, and even your values, while the fact kills them…

Best regards!

Safwat · **مرسل:** السبت أكتوبر 29, 2011 10:53 pm

[english]Ranaa,
Thank you sister .
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Imagination is the best place to live your dreams, and even your values, while the fact kills them…
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It kills them sometimes, but not always . I think that if we put our life in imagination , we will be eternal after life . If we live and lose , it is a dilemma .[/english]

hatch · **مرسل:** السبت أكتوبر 29, 2011 11:22 pm

Safwat,
you did good job friend . awesome ,wonderful i am proud of you
keep up
best wishes

باسل العمروش · **مرسل:** الأحد أكتوبر 30, 2011 12:59 am

Do you know what I like in your poems?
The HARMONY!

Keep it up, I really like it.

سليمان الحسن · **مرسل:** الأحد أكتوبر 30, 2011 9:41 pm

that is fine but in my opinion you should stand your imagination up and up and up

سليمان الحسن · **مرسل:** الأحد أكتوبر 30, 2011 9:42 pm

that is fine but in my opinion you should increase your imagination up and up and up

Safwat · **مرسل:** الاثنين أكتوبر 31, 2011 2:11 am

[english]hatch, [quote]
you did good job friend . awesome ,wonderful i am proud of you
keep up
best wishes
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Thank you for your lovely words
باسل العمروش, [quote]
The HARMONY!
[/quote]
That is because you are accurate bro
سليمان الحسن, [quote]
you should increase your imagination up and up and up
[/quote]
I will ...I will make it limitless[/english]

Safwat · **مرسل:** الخميس ديسمبر 01, 2011 9:03 pm

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