[align=center]Immortal In Death

Nobody can hear my shouts and screams...
In this world I lost all of my hope and dreams...

Nothingness, world of darkness, where am I...
I turned around and thought this might be lie...

Serpants and dragons bite me day and night...
Yet I survive and I know something is not right...

I have no strength to move a finger anymore...
I am supposed to be dead and no more...

Tons of huge rocks being thrown on my head...
I wish it's the end and I hope I am dead ...

I can see angels and they are killing me again...
I am dead, I die again and again yet alive I remain...

I believed for immortality there will never be a portal...
Surprisingly enough, in the end I've became immortal...

I finally figured out where I am, 6 feet under the ground...
Where only darkness and soldiers of god roam around...

Yeah I died before and I am already dead, it's life after death...
God made me a special immortal, the immortal in death... [/align][/color]



yamen....

you make me wanna cry
beautiful words

thanks roula

Thank you
you express your ideas in an amazing way

مرح,

u r so welcome and thanks a lot for ur sweet words

Thanks Yamen.........It is really an effective poem by all its lines because it remainds us about death ..........May Allah Forgive all of us .

Yamen,

Thanks so much for your effective poem
it's very nice despite the gloomy desperate atmosphere

i like these kinds of poems.......
they really make you free yourself from depression by imaging thier figures and how the poet plays with words just to force you seeing the inner darkest side of your soul
Yamen, if these above lines are yours
i really respect your way of thinking man....
i did some lyrics for the band i sing in, maybe i can post them here to have your comments

Yamen,
That was a cool poem .... but I think you sould be more optimistic

والله يا يامن عم اتبدعنا بجديدك سلمت يداك