Last Night Inspiration.

Nawal8q · **مرسل:** الأحد أكتوبر 19, 2008 3:12 pm

Hello every one, last night I couldn't sleep till 6 a.m. in the morning and to loll myself a little bit, I took my note book and started writing....what I wrote was really silly but I like it, it composes a very nice rhythm , it appeared like a rap song...
Here I would like you to read it...but don't laugh….

It’s only me asking about thee.
How did you find living away from here?
Did you like the weather there or not?
Did it suit you, or it was extremely hot?
Did you love the city? The buildings and the land?
Did you fell in love with it’s desert sand?
How did you find the sun rising behind the sea?
Whom did you imagined there with thee?
Are you going to stay forever in that land?
Did you just slept away from my hand?
How does it feel to see the desert wide?
Did you enjoy reading at the sea side?
Sorry, I didn’t notice that I’m only asking.
Didn’t take a moment revising..
I wish I could tell you about me now,
But this is getting too long as you see.
Maybe next time I’ll be able to tell you.
That I did let go..
And now I’m free.

That’s it….

سنا · **مرسل:** الأحد أكتوبر 19, 2008 3:50 pm

اقتباس:

Whom did you imagined there with thee?

are you sure you are not an English Literature student!!!

very nice

Nawal8q · **مرسل:** الأحد أكتوبر 19, 2008 3:53 pm

[english]سنا,
My frind is half Syrian half American, and she read alot of book...and sometimes she teachs me new words like the old English style of writing..[/english]

Osama · **مرسل:** الأحد أكتوبر 19, 2008 4:06 pm

Nawal8q,
it very nice ..........specially the ends
land, sand
wide , side

you have to be an English student

Raghad · **مرسل:** الاثنين أكتوبر 20, 2008 1:54 am

Nawal8q,

It's really good

Really the one who doesn't know you ,thinks that you are an excellent student of English

Go ahead

Nawal8q · **مرسل:** الخميس أكتوبر 23, 2008 3:02 pm

[english]Raghad,
Thank you....

[/english]

Safwat · **مرسل:** الخميس أكتوبر 23, 2008 5:11 pm

Really nice ...........

the spontaneous words are the light ones which enlighten the hearts and sometimes the tears .

حلواني · **مرسل:** الخميس أكتوبر 23, 2008 6:13 pm

Wow! It's really nice and the words u choose it an english student i think can not do as u do,for this you should be an english student .

Odysseus · **مرسل:** السبت أكتوبر 25, 2008 4:00 am

Nawal, It is great as you. I really do NOT know what to say, it seems that you like poetry. I'll say what I always say

, God Bless Thee.
I do NOT know you, but I've formed an image about you. I try to read all what you write in this forum. I really DO respect thee.

اقتباس:

It’s only me asking about thee.

, I like to use "thee" instead of "You" so much . . .

اقتباس:

Did you like the weather there or not?
Did it suit you, or it was extremely hot?

Great Great Great Great

اقتباس:

Are you going to stay forever in that land?

Did you write this for a real person

?? Or what?

Nawal8q · **مرسل:** السبت أكتوبر 25, 2008 3:06 pm

Safwat, حلواني, Odysseus,
Thank you all, you are really wonderful...

[quote]
I do NOT know you, but I've formed an image about you. I try to read all what you write in this forum. I really DO respect thee.
[/quote]

thank you .....
I do really respect you too.

[quote]
Did you write this for a real person ?? Or what?
[/quote]
or what..

??

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