Safwat,  

Actually yesterday I have finished reading your nice story , but I have just one comment : Why did shaza agree to talk with Rashed on the massenger while she was known that he will be closer to her when they will talk about something not related to their studies????


She attracted him with her thoughts , kindness , opinions and then she asked him to treat her as abrother and a sister    

Oh , sorry but I felt that I sympathize with Rashed cause he wants her as a wife for the future   Shaza give him a small hope to be her lover but at the end she refuse    


Safwat,  Thanks very very much
It is a great story    

I wish for you a great future by writing English short stories          

ملاك,  
 



do not forget the (s)

Thanks fpr your comment

I wanted to shed the light on Shza, the strong girl who can control her lover and society because she is a girl and can seduce anyone agrees her offer.

Safwat,  thanks a lot    

شغاف,  

u are welcome.............

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My brothers and sisters ..........


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