Hi there
I hope you tell me your opinion about this poem which I wrote
and already I thank you
and I hope you write in English
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A Describe Of My Angel
Every time I look to sky
I see her blue eyes
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Myself feels the childhood with her
When I see the long and flowing hair
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So you can describe the smile is "charm"
She always receive me with opened arm
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One look at the face let you say "prettiness"
So that you can not say any word except ''innocence"
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Every second I breathe , I remember
And also imagine her stature figure
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She always walks in slowness
So you know she full of smartness
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I do not know what should I do
As I feel her interested and clue
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She is the one whom I chose
So my heart never want to lose
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I see her as brilliant as the morning star So I want to catch it soon
But what to do when she looks more beautiful than the ''full moon''
Even I did n't reach to the TOP of the mountain ,But I had the honor to TRY