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الكاتب: | Saturnine [ الجمعة فبراير 29, 2008 4:14 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A story |
Funerary Dirge "Run." A mother shouted in fear to let her son named Omar to run away from death. Omar the 7 years old child, runs away to the jungle. From there, he heard, machine gun, canons and jets' ear-splitting sounds. After less than 22 hours. He came back, trying to find his mother, his family, and his home. He was surprised by murderers dressed uniform, and before he realized what was the matter, a machine gun's bullets exploded his head into pieces, less than a moment later, he saw his mother smiling from the other side, calling, "Omar come here my sweet child." Finish |
الكاتب: | Raghad [ الجمعة فبراير 29, 2008 5:14 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A story |
Saturnine, ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God ![]() ![]() ![]() May Allah bless them all and protect our nation from such evils |
الكاتب: | Lina [ الجمعة فبراير 29, 2008 5:27 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A story |
Saturnine, it's a real story unfortunately ![]() ![]() ![]() may Allah protect all our brothers and sisters in the Arab countries ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
الكاتب: | Raghad [ الجمعة فبراير 29, 2008 5:28 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A story |
اقتباس:
A mother shouted in fear to let her son named Omar to run away from death
A mother shouthed in fearto let her son ,named Omar, run away After"let" put the infinitive without 'to' اقتباس:
From there, he heard,
There is no need to this comma after 'heard'
اقتباس:
After less than 22 hours. He came back,
After less than 22 hours , he came back ![]() ![]() ![]() |
الكاتب: | Obada Arwany [ الجمعة فبراير 29, 2008 6:34 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A story |
[english]Saturnine, What a sad story!! Thank you lord for the boon of security. Thank u Saturnine,[/english] |
الكاتب: | رغدة [ السبت مارس 01, 2008 3:18 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A story |
it is a sad and painful story thanks alot |
الكاتب: | سنا [ السبت مارس 01, 2008 3:21 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A story |
What a sad story!! thanks daer. ![]() |
الكاتب: | Saturnine [ الخميس يوليو 24, 2008 9:43 am ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A story |
Safwat read this story, I wrote it, if it touches you, so I'm a good beginner ![]() |
الكاتب: | Nawal8q [ الخميس يوليو 24, 2008 7:17 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A story |
Saturnine, Nice language and story...but toooooooooooo short! |
الكاتب: | Nawal8q [ الجمعة يوليو 25, 2008 9:16 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A story |
Funerary Dirge |
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