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الكاتب:  Safwat [ السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 2:58 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  A struggle in my Memory

A struggle in my Memory



You migrated my rare heart and soul
But you are invading my active memory
You bequeathed it a big cruel haul
So it becomes not sad and not merry
Do you regard my feeling as dead as a doll?
And you injured my memory without being sorry?



You started with me with your soft words?
But then you became fond of your invented odds
I think we were too close to each other
So we slotted the heavy rocks by our little fords
But you made these fords go separated shores
And your crazy ideas were more harmful as swords


I feel that sentimentality mocks at us now
Because we ignored frankness and dashed it out
Our near houses became like struggling towns
And you still have nothing but craziness and shouts
One day you will see your tongue as a rusty saw
When your loving misled people will run out



Everybody may commit many faults
Unfortunately, you were my fault
But these faults are teachers
And we are still running like the colts
And we are still enough strong against bolts
But I and you are in love with our thoughts


My memory likes the time in which we started
But it is obliged to forget you at last
And it is not happy because you parted it
But we can solve our problem and cast
Remember that I confessed and talked
And remember always that past is past

الكاتب:  Lina [ السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 6:14 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة: 

Safwat,
اقتباس:
You started with me with your soft words?
But then you became fond of your invented odds
I advised you ..But you didn't listen to me :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

الكاتب:  Safwat [ السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 7:57 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة: 

اقتباس:
I advised you ..But you didn't listen to me
Could you please tell me what you mean?

الكاتب:  G.H [ السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 8:01 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة: 

You are a talented poet indeed . Go on
God be with you *ورود *1

الكاتب:  Lina [ السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 11:08 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة: 

Safwat,
:shock: :shock: :shock:
I'm sorry I was just kidding

:oops: :oops:
:cry:

الكاتب:  Safwat [ الأحد سبتمبر 09, 2007 8:43 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة: 

[quote]
You are a talented poet indeed . Go on
God be with you
[/quote]
G.H,
Thanks so much [quote]
I'm sorry I was just kidding
[/quote]
Lina,
Thanks and it is kind of you to apologize ..so I accept but could you tell me about your opinion about the poem . *1

الكاتب:  مرح [ الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 12:24 am ]
عنوان المشاركة: 

your poem is so effective
It touches me an makes me feel sad and Idon not know why :roll:
your abililty to write poetry is a great gift from Alaah
go on SAFWAT *ورود *ورود
اقتباس:
And remember always that past is past
You are right *1 *1

الكاتب:  Adnan [ الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 12:29 am ]
عنوان المشاركة: 

اقتباس:
your abililty to write poetry is a great gift from Alaah
مرح,
that is right
god bless you my brother
adnan
*1

الكاتب:  Lina [ الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 3:39 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة: 

Safwat,

you don't need my opinion Safwat cuz you know it..
you know that I'm one of your fans
:wink: :wink:

it's great

الكاتب:  Safwat [ الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 8:45 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة: 

[quote]
your abililty to write poetry is a great gift from Alaah
[/quote]
Allah
Thanks MARAH *1
[quote]
god bless you my brother
[/quote]
*1
[quote]
I'm one of your fans
[/quote]
iT IS MY PLEASURE *1

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