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الكاتب: | Safwat [ السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 2:58 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | A struggle in my Memory |
A struggle in my Memory
You migrated my rare heart and soul But you are invading my active memory You bequeathed it a big cruel haul So it becomes not sad and not merry Do you regard my feeling as dead as a doll? And you injured my memory without being sorry? You started with me with your soft words? But then you became fond of your invented odds I think we were too close to each other So we slotted the heavy rocks by our little fords But you made these fords go separated shores And your crazy ideas were more harmful as swords I feel that sentimentality mocks at us now Because we ignored frankness and dashed it out Our near houses became like struggling towns And you still have nothing but craziness and shouts One day you will see your tongue as a rusty saw When your loving misled people will run out Everybody may commit many faults Unfortunately, you were my fault But these faults are teachers And we are still running like the colts And we are still enough strong against bolts But I and you are in love with our thoughts My memory likes the time in which we started But it is obliged to forget you at last And it is not happy because you parted it But we can solve our problem and cast Remember that I confessed and talked And remember always that past is past |
الكاتب: | Lina [ السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 6:14 pm ] |
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Safwat, اقتباس:
You started with me with your soft words?
I advised you ..But you didn't listen to me But then you became fond of your invented odds ![]() |
الكاتب: | Safwat [ السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 7:57 pm ] |
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اقتباس:
I advised you ..But you didn't listen to me
Could you please tell me what you mean?
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الكاتب: | G.H [ السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 8:01 pm ] |
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You are a talented poet indeed . Go on God be with you ![]() ![]() |
الكاتب: | Lina [ السبت سبتمبر 08, 2007 11:08 pm ] |
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Safwat, ![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry I was just kidding ![]() ![]() ![]() |
الكاتب: | Safwat [ الأحد سبتمبر 09, 2007 8:43 pm ] |
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[quote] You are a talented poet indeed . Go on God be with you [/quote] G.H, Thanks so much [quote] I'm sorry I was just kidding [/quote] Lina, Thanks and it is kind of you to apologize ..so I accept but could you tell me about your opinion about the poem . ![]() |
الكاتب: | مرح [ الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 12:24 am ] |
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your poem is so effective It touches me an makes me feel sad and Idon not know why ![]() your abililty to write poetry is a great gift from Alaah go on SAFWAT ![]() ![]() اقتباس:
And remember always that past is past
You are right ![]() ![]() |
الكاتب: | Adnan [ الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 12:29 am ] |
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اقتباس:
your abililty to write poetry is a great gift from Alaah
مرح, that is right god bless you my brother adnan ![]() |
الكاتب: | Lina [ الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 3:39 pm ] |
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Safwat, you don't need my opinion Safwat cuz you know it.. you know that I'm one of your fans ![]() ![]() it's great |
الكاتب: | Safwat [ الاثنين سبتمبر 10, 2007 8:45 pm ] |
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[quote] your abililty to write poetry is a great gift from Alaah [/quote] Allah Thanks MARAH ![]() [quote] god bless you my brother [/quote] ![]() [quote] I'm one of your fans [/quote] iT IS MY PLEASURE ![]() |
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