Thefuturist92
It is really fantastic
Have you written it by yourself ? Thank u very much
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| الكاتب: | thefuturist92 [ الأربعاء أغسطس 08, 2007 3:49 pm ] |
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After years of disappointing, After years of loneliness, After years of despair, The sun has started sending its lights to that hopeless's life. He was incredibly pessimistic. He never thinks about something good. He used to hate everyone around him. He used to be away from people. But since the sun tried to help him, his life became much, much better.. Frankly, the sun was sending her lights to his life for years! But it didn't work till he found love… Although he never believes in love, He falls in love!! He couldn't understand why or how, coz it was love from the first sight… He saw her while he was in one of his despair moments… She was a florist… He saw her giving a sad child some roses… And that child became much happier … Then our pessimistic man realized that he needs some love, And an affectionate person in his life. So, he walked towards her.. The strangest thing was; Everyday in his way to work, he always goes across that street And he never noticed that lovely young women She was in her 20's, tall and slim, With white skin, and pure blue eyes. Just like the sky.. And her long blonde her was amazing!! But the most thing he liked about her was her smile, her warm smile. While he was walking towards her he wanted to smile. But he forgot how to smile, he doesn't even remember when was the last time he smiled. He was asking himself; "what I have to say?" However, he stood in front of her Looking straightly to her eyes without saying anything Her amazing eyes were effecting him.. He couldn't move.. Neither could she.. After long moments of silent She asked softly; "Do you want some flowers??" Her voice was as warm as her smile He felt like a king who owns the whole world And he said; "No, all what I want is the hand which takes care of the flowers!!" Then for the first time in his life,, he realized that he was existed!! |
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| الكاتب: | خزامى [ الأربعاء أغسطس 08, 2007 4:20 pm ] |
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wonderfull ....amaizing and lovely I like It very much .. keep up and show us more OK? |
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| الكاتب: | Raghad [ الأربعاء أغسطس 08, 2007 4:20 pm ] |
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Thefuturist92 It is really fantastic Have you written it by yourself ? Thank u very much
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| الكاتب: | thefuturist92 [ الأربعاء أغسطس 08, 2007 4:33 pm ] |
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Thank you, Raghad and khazoom.. Yes I wrote it myself... but do you like the happy endings or the sad ones... |
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| الكاتب: | thefuturist92 [ الأربعاء أغسطس 08, 2007 4:34 pm ] |
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Thank you, Raghad and khazoom.. Yes I wrote it myself... but do you like the happy endings or the sad ones... |
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| الكاتب: | خزامى [ الأربعاء أغسطس 08, 2007 4:37 pm ] |
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both |
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| الكاتب: | thefuturist92 [ الأربعاء أغسطس 08, 2007 4:40 pm ] |
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I wanted to make it a sad one , so would you mind?? |
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