really thanks and i like every one to read it carefully
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| الكاتب: | Yamen [ الثلاثاء يوليو 31, 2007 10:18 pm ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | FROZEN** LOVE .....y |
[align=center]Frozen Love I always thought we'd grow old together. Facing each new day. But now, in the tears that fall upon my face. Your memory fades away. We walked with our problems in silence. Dawn falling into dusk. Leafs collecting at our cold and tired feet. Along with what grieved us. In my bedroom, surrounded by empty walls. I want to scream and shout. My mouth opens, but the tortured words... Just won't come out. You! This man I began to love. Got lost for a "Nothing". Everything we'd built, destroyed. Over one careless fling. Used to think I was so lucky. I had it all. Nothing unknown is knowable, so depressed. You just watched me fall. My heart bleeds. The snow becomes red. How life has mocked you. Were you ever here? memories gone, dead. Your like salt on an open wound. Reminding me you once were here. Warm like the blood in my veins. The love I had for you, so dear. In my distorted, broken dreams. So empty, yet real. I'm floating through air. I touch your face, hoping to feel. This frozen silence belongs to you. I'm all that you see. I only want revenge. Giving back what you gave to me. Sorry I loved you so. And you didn't feel the same. When I think of what could have been. What a waste! Such a shame! [/align][/color] yamen....... |
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| الكاتب: | مرح [ الثلاثاء يوليو 31, 2007 11:14 pm ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | Re: FROZEN** LOVE .....y |
I like your poem so much Thank you. . . . أصعب احساس Sorry I loved you so. And you didn't feel the same. When I think of what could have been. What a waste! Such a shame! [/align][/color][/size] |
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ الأربعاء أغسطس 01, 2007 1:50 am ] |
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اقتباس:
My heart bleeds.
You have wounded me .....I have already remembered my dead friend .The snow becomes red. How life has mocked you. Were you ever here? memories gone, dead. God Bless you |
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| الكاتب: | Yamen [ الأربعاء أغسطس 01, 2007 1:41 pm ] |
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really thanks and i like every one to read it carefully
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| الكاتب: | Raghad [ الأربعاء أغسطس 01, 2007 3:45 pm ] |
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Yamen It is really very beautiful , thank u very much
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| الكاتب: | فارس [ الأربعاء أغسطس 01, 2007 4:11 pm ] |
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Yamen, wooow .... keep going 
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| الكاتب: | Roula [ الأربعاء أغسطس 01, 2007 8:10 pm ] |
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Beautiful words Yamen..........but they are sooooooooo sad.... 
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| الكاتب: | Yamen [ الأربعاء أغسطس 01, 2007 9:21 pm ] |
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Roula, Raghad, فارس, MoondanceR, thanx so much friend but this is some of black side in my life ............thanx 
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| الكاتب: | نرجس [ الخميس أغسطس 02, 2007 3:51 am ] |
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Yamen, دائما بقصائدك تضغط على اوتار حساسة  
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| الكاتب: | سنا [ الخميس أغسطس 02, 2007 10:07 am ] |
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اقتباس:
Your memory fades away.
اقتباس:
We walked with our problems in silence.
Dawn falling into dusk اقتباس:
Sorry I loved you so.
بتجنن........... ورائعة وبتضرب عالأوتار الحساسة كمان.........وما حد بيستاهل |
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