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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ الخميس أكتوبر 27, 2011 11:33 pm ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | An Art... in my Heart |
[align=center]  I have an art in my heart Saves your joyful name In every sacred part It pushes my eyes To miss your eyes And to endure its darts Your beauty never stops And year by year, It does not vanish, Nay , it really starts When this art meets you in music, I know how music is smart It calls me to take you To dance beyond imagination To give you a nation In which you color the moon And you color the soul And you color the stars Safwat[/align] |
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| الكاتب: | Ranaa [ السبت أكتوبر 29, 2011 12:14 am ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | An Art... in my Heart |
Fine Safwat Frankly, the title is musical, and it attracts the reader to know your "Art"… You've used simple wrods, but they are full of meanings and pictures. You've said "Imagination", this is so effective…do you know why? Imagination is the best place to live your dreams, and even your values, while the fact kills them…  Best regards! |
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ السبت أكتوبر 29, 2011 10:53 pm ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | An Art... in my Heart |
[english]Ranaa, Thank you sister . [quote] Imagination is the best place to live your dreams, and even your values, while the fact kills them… [/quote] It kills them sometimes, but not always . I think that if we put our life in imagination , we will be eternal after life . If we live and lose , it is a dilemma .[/english] |
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| الكاتب: | hatch [ السبت أكتوبر 29, 2011 11:22 pm ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | An Art... in my Heart |
Safwat, you did good job friend . awesome ,wonderful i am proud of you keep up best wishes |
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| الكاتب: | باسل العمروش [ الأحد أكتوبر 30, 2011 12:59 am ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | An Art... in my Heart |
Do you know what I like in your poems? The HARMONY! Keep it up, I really like it. |
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| الكاتب: | سليمان الحسن [ الأحد أكتوبر 30, 2011 9:41 pm ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | An Art... in my Heart |
that is fine but in my opinion you should stand your imagination up and up and up 
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| الكاتب: | سليمان الحسن [ الأحد أكتوبر 30, 2011 9:42 pm ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | An Art... in my Heart |
that is fine but in my opinion you should increase your imagination up and up and up
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ الاثنين أكتوبر 31, 2011 2:11 am ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | An Art... in my Heart |
[english]hatch, [quote] you did good job friend . awesome ,wonderful i am proud of you keep up best wishes [/quote] Thank you for your lovely words باسل العمروش, [quote] The HARMONY! [/quote] That is because you are accurate bro سليمان الحسن, [quote] you should increase your imagination up and up and up [/quote] I will ...I will make it limitless[/english] |
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ الخميس ديسمبر 01, 2011 9:03 pm ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | An Art... in my Heart |
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