Safwat...........
INdeed , GENIUS
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ السبت يوليو 14, 2007 12:52 am ] |
| عنوان المشاركة: | An Apology for my Flower |
[align=center]An Apology for my Flower [/align] [align=center] I apologize to you because I symbolized you to her I have thought unconsciously that she will be near Yeah, no one can deny that she is too fair But beauty is forged when she sheds her false tears O flower , I hope that you can speak to me and share To tell you about the bad days I have spent with fear She told me many lies and claimed that I am too dear But her masks made me hers and numb to my ear I discovered her and became as a free breath of air The ice of the pain in my heart made it as a dead pear Till I met those honest people who really care I helped them , and they helped me to be there Where I have faithful people waiting for me to forget her And to show them how I am really deserved to be dear[/align] SaFwAt HaNoUf 2007-07-13 |
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| الكاتب: | Tami [ السبت يوليو 14, 2007 1:04 am ] |
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They are very beautiful words you are a brilliant poet... Go ahead |
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| الكاتب: | G.H [ السبت يوليو 14, 2007 10:03 am ] |
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Safwat........... INdeed , GENIUS
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| الكاتب: | Naim Kishi [ السبت يوليو 14, 2007 10:20 am ] |
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very nice Safwat .. thatz what I may call a real poem but be noted اقتباس:
anyone cannot deny that she is too fair
no one can keep the good work
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| الكاتب: | Roula [ السبت يوليو 14, 2007 1:16 pm ] |
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thanx 4 u Safwat......so good |
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ السبت يوليو 14, 2007 5:18 pm ] |
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Roula, Thanks for you too.Naim_k, Thanks alot Naim , I have alraedy changed it.G.H, Thanks ....  The Jasmine, Thanks for your sweet words and for all your comments on my topics |
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| الكاتب: | Obada Arwany [ السبت يوليو 14, 2007 6:23 pm ] |
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اقتباس: And to show them how I am really deserved to be dear this is very affecte |
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| الكاتب: | Yamen [ السبت يوليو 14, 2007 8:48 pm ] |
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Safwat, my bro. u r a poet really and ur topics are so beautiful so please write more and more
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| الكاتب: | Safwat [ السبت يوليو 14, 2007 8:54 pm ] |
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اقتباس:
this is very affecte
Obadah, for the second time YOU must write EFFECTIVE BECAUSE IT IS AN ADJECTIVE اقتباس:
my bro. u r a poet really and ur topics are so beautiful so please write more and more
THANKS YAMENPLEASE, YOU TOO
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| الكاتب: | نرجس [ الأربعاء يوليو 18, 2007 2:46 am ] |
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Safwat, ياااااااااااااااااااااااااه يا سلام ما شاء الله عليك |
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