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محمد حيدر · **مرسل:** الثلاثاء إبريل 26, 2011 4:27 am

thanks for every one who read the mini poem i wrote

rose82 · **مرسل:** الثلاثاء إبريل 26, 2011 3:32 pm

Really thank you my brother ,your words so fantastic and nice
my best regards for you

لمى · **مرسل:** الثلاثاء إبريل 26, 2011 5:08 pm

nice one
but you dont think that there is alittle of exageration,especialy

اقتباس:

He smiled when he made daughters
because He knew he had
created love and happiness

in those lines

محمد حيدر · **مرسل:** الأربعاء إبريل 27, 2011 3:45 am

well i'm just a beginner , i know i'm exaggerating but that was the only idea that crossed my mind

لمى · **مرسل:** الخميس إبريل 28, 2011 9:47 pm

its a Nice try

u can try another one and show it for arteeens

BEST LUCK
LAMOOSH