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Hi there
I hope you tell me your opinion about this poem which I wrote
and already I thank you
and I hope you write in English
****************************
A Describe Of My Angel

Every time I look to sky
I see her blue eyes
* * *
Myself feels the childhood with her
When I see the long and flowing hair
* * *
So you can describe the smile is "charm"
She always receive me with opened arm
* * *
One look at the face let you say "prettiness"
So that you can not say any word except ''innocence"
* * *
Every second I breathe , I remember
And also imagine her stature figure
* * *
She always walks in slowness
So you know she full of smartness
* * *
I do not know what should I do
As I feel her interested and clue
* * *
She is the one whom I chose
So my heart never want to lose
* * *
I see her as brilliant as the morning star So I want to catch it soon
But what to do when she looks more beautiful than the ''full moon''

Even I did n't reach to the TOP of the mountain ,But I had the honor to TRY

الكاتب:	علاء الدين [ الأربعاء يوليو 01, 2009 10:28 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:	-A Poem Of My-Angel
Hi there I hope you tell me your opinion about this poem which I wrote and already I thank you and I hope you write in English **************************** A Describe Of My Angel Every time I look to sky I see her blue eyes * * * Myself feels the childhood with her When I see the long and flowing hair * * * So you can describe the smile is "charm" She always receive me with opened arm * * * One look at the face let you say "prettiness" So that you can not say any word except ''innocence" * * * Every second I breathe , I remember And also imagine her stature figure * * * She always walks in slowness So you know she full of smartness * * * I do not know what should I do As I feel her interested and clue * * * She is the one whom I chose So my heart never want to lose * * * I see her as brilliant as the morning star So I want to catch it soon But what to do when she looks more beautiful than the ''full moon'' Even I did n't reach to the TOP of the mountain ,But I had the honor to TRY

الكاتب:	asser4 love [ الأربعاء يوليو 22, 2009 3:05 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:	-A Poem Of My-Angel
اقتباس: She is the one whom I chose So my heart never want to lose I like it اقتباس: Even I did n't reach to the TOP of the mountain ,But I had the honor to TRY it`s your chanc bro you have tried so go on n you will reach

الكاتب:	Mohammed [ الأربعاء يوليو 29, 2009 3:59 am ]
عنوان المشاركة:	-A Poem Of My-Angel
tnx bro. for ur emotional words>> just wanna ask u 2 reconsider the following phrases and expressions , then tell me where the mistakes R ?OLo - already i thank you -a describe -every time -to sky - myself feels -the long and flowing hair -she always receive . . . . . >>> bro. if u want us 2 reply in ENGLISH plz plz pzl try a lil bit more 2 improve urs <<<<<<<<<<<<im sure u didn't xpkt such a reply sorry>> but nice try anyway just an opinion

الكاتب:	علاء الدين [ الأربعاء أغسطس 05, 2009 9:43 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:	-A Poem Of My-Angel
ok man tkanks alot u r true there are lots of written mistakes I respect ur opinion thanks again

الكاتب:	A..R..W..A [ الخميس أغسطس 06, 2009 12:15 am ]
عنوان المشاركة:	-A Poem Of My-Angel
Nice emotions اقتباس: Even I did n't reach to the TOP of the mountain ,But I had the honor to TRY Nice علاء الدين, go on

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