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مرسل: السبت أغسطس 16, 2008 10:38 pm 
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[english]Hi to all
This topic is just for story tellers, the ones that really want to create something, to invent and write. This topic is for every one thinks that he could write.
The idea is about sharing your writings with others, and write a story together.
I will explain, let's imagine that we got 4 participants, and they are ready to write, we put an idea in progress, an idea for a story, the idea should give us only general event and then each one of the four contesters tries his best to write a part of the story which at last will be put to be criticized.
Now, I need participants, I'm number one.
Who's number two???[/english]

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مرسل: الأربعاء أغسطس 27, 2008 12:14 am 
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I'm the third
I've written stories before in Arabic ;I 'm trying to translate them into En as I know their meanings better than anybody else. On the otherhand, I'd like to write new ones in En ...I don't know really what may be created on papers!!so
Could I help you>>>I'm ready.

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مرسل: الأربعاء أغسطس 27, 2008 1:53 pm 
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Ok I will be the 4th

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مرسل: الأربعاء أغسطس 27, 2008 1:55 pm 
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Let us begin with six-word story:

my story is:

Attack life, sure you will lose.

Nice six-word story right :wink:

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مرسل: الخميس أغسطس 28, 2008 9:23 pm 
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If you mean your comment for me, I just write the story as you see, it is only six words.
try to write six words and make them a story as I do, it is a way to discover everyone of us and how he can simply makes stories.

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مرسل: السبت أغسطس 30, 2008 1:12 pm 
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Sheba, Welcome back.
*1
And for your six word stories, I will write another topic for it, but here we are going to share our ideas to write one good story.
I liked your idea *1

LYLA,
Yalla, it's very good to have people here for the first time writing with us...welcome honey. *1

Osama,
You are welcome too, but I wish you to study well for your exams. *1
Ok , since we are four in here, let's start.

The idea of the story is like the following. A man who had just got back to his country after being away for four years, he got back to his family and he is full of hidden anger, when he first left, his wife called him after three months to tell him that she is pregnant, and he couldn't believe it...how can it happen?? he is away, but she forgot to tell him that she is pregnant since three months but it didn't appear in the first two months. He became suspicious, angry, doubt fills his mind and he now starts to think of a way to get the 4 years boy lost...

Now this is the idea, and we should agree on whom going to begin and who will write the body and who will write the end.
I'm ready to write the first part , who's next???

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Fill my fond heart with God alone, for he
Alone can rival, can succeed to thee.

How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!
Each pray'r accepted, and each wish resign'd;


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مرسل: الأحد أغسطس 31, 2008 11:32 pm 
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Hi
Nawal8q There're many things I want to say & I hope you'll agree with me .
Firstly,I'll comment on the language :we should agree on the tense _you mixed too much tenses that mean alots & give the readers disturbing thoughts_ so to be clear it's better to use simple past or present &that's enough releating to the language of stories. Secondly<the theme you 've chosen,mmmmmmmmm I 'd have written the last part gladly IF the theme wasn't about this....'COS we 're fed up with those stories about relations & anti relations, legal & illegal children, husbands & wives.....etc.BE PATIENT! PLEASE..you aren't a poor student of ART like us who study stories about that all around the year!!!!.so
I 'll leave to you , Sheba and,
Osama
the choosing of the theme if you don't mind .....or I have a propositin..Anyway, I'll wait your suggestions...
It's very very nice to dare ourselves in a project like this >>THANKS heartly all

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مرسل: الاثنين سبتمبر 01, 2008 12:07 pm 
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Let me tell you something, please understand me, if you want to let others know you have creative hand to write a story, try with what I will inform you.

First:
Choose the idea, or the theme and what so ever.
Second:
Plot must be interesting, and giving lesson or referring for something
Third:
The most important is:
Everyone must write the story we suggest trying to write it in less than 100 words, this way we can see and feel s/he has the creativity to start this project for example.


The process:

Write about a child who is mute, working as a shepherd in the mountain far away from city, and a girl who is a litte younger than him, who become so close and love each others, enjoying the life or nature, love, but lately a tragic end.

Sure in this way, you can decide the child boy ( Mute), and girl, the way of meeting, the way of loving, the way of tragic end.

100 words only.

Try and let us see your writings.

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مرسل: الاثنين سبتمبر 01, 2008 5:36 pm 
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I just like what Lyal and Sheba said, and we will go on the mission of 100 word story.

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Fill my fond heart with God alone, for he
Alone can rival, can succeed to thee.

How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!
Each pray'r accepted, and each wish resign'd;


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مرسل: الأحد سبتمبر 07, 2008 3:42 pm 
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I will start very soon, Inshallah

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Fill my fond heart with God alone, for he
Alone can rival, can succeed to thee.

How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!
Each pray'r accepted, and each wish resign'd;


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