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الكاتب: | Talal [ الاثنين سبتمبر 15, 2008 6:21 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | find out the mistakes |
Here you can try to find out the mistakes in the following sentence. After I revise it you can add your wrong sentence to be corrected. The following is my sentence: Samer suggested that his sister go to meet her boss but she refused to do so. She repeated again that she did not want to do so when her brother insisted. |
الكاتب: | Husam [ الاثنين سبتمبر 15, 2008 7:56 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | find out the mistakes |
thank u for ur nice idea I will try on this sentence: اقتباس:
Samer suggested that his sister go to meet her boss but she refused to do so. She repeated again that she did not want to do so when her brother insisted
Samer suggested that his sister goes to meet her boss, but she refused to do so. She repeated again that she doesn't want to when her brother insisted I'm not sure but I guiss it is somehow right ![]() waiting for ur correction..... thanx ![]() |
الكاتب: | Husam [ الاثنين سبتمبر 15, 2008 8:09 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | find out the mistakes |
here is my sentence: The English don't wear very stylishly. it is easy. waiting for you ![]() |
الكاتب: | سنا [ الثلاثاء سبتمبر 16, 2008 11:48 am ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | find out the mistakes |
اقتباس:
The English don't wear very stylishly
English doesn't>.... ![]() |
الكاتب: | Husam [ الثلاثاء سبتمبر 16, 2008 3:57 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | find out the mistakes |
اقتباس:
English doesn't
no no, "don't" is right... because I mean the English as a people. But the word " wear" is the wrong one because "wear" needs an object and there is no object in this sentence the right word should be "dress" instead because it does't need an object so the sentence would be like this: The English don't dress very stylishly. ![]() Talal, still waiting for you........[/b] |
الكاتب: | Talal [ الثلاثاء سبتمبر 16, 2008 7:42 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | find out the mistakes |
[ quote="Talal"]Samer suggested that his sister go to meet her boss but she refused to do so. She repeated again [/quote] In fact the sentence does not contain any mistakes except for the expression ‘repeat again’ because the verb ‘repeat’ itself means ‘to say again’. As for the third person singular ‘s’ it is not necessary to be added to the verb ‘go’ because it is placed in the subjunctive case. I usually provide something rarely used in our university. This way of putting it is more or less a literary one. Husam The ambiguity in your example is very nice. I liked to check your mistake myself but I was very busy. Now you can add more sentences I may come back later |
الكاتب: | Raghad [ الجمعة سبتمبر 19, 2008 2:53 am ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | find out the mistakes |
Talal, اقتباس:
the expression ‘repeat again’ because the verb ‘repeat’ itself means ‘to say again’.
Do you know ? one may not notice such mistake ![]() ![]() ![]() Where is the Error But no problem we can start a new one ![]() Husam, Yours is good also ![]() But please try to put the nunber of mistakes another time in order to make it easy for the members ![]() Mine : Only when the manager arrive , we shall learn the whole truth. There are two mistakes ![]() |
الكاتب: | Talal [ الجمعة سبتمبر 19, 2008 5:41 am ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | find out the mistakes |
Raghad The mistakes lie in the following 'manage' should be 'manages' and 'we shall' should be inverted Mine again: For he knows how important it is, Ahmad shall never miss the book he is loving. only one mistake |
الكاتب: | Raghad [ الجمعة سبتمبر 19, 2008 3:39 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | find out the mistakes |
Talal, اقتباس:
'manage' should be 'manages'
but the word is "manager" not "manage" ![]() Please now write it in its best form ![]() |
الكاتب: | Talal [ الجمعة سبتمبر 19, 2008 5:21 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | find out the mistakes |
]Dear Raghad, Thank you for the sentence. All what I remembered was that I should add an 's' but perhaps I did not pay attention to the sentence itself. Now your sentence should be like this: Only when the manager arrives, shall we learn the whole truth. It is wise of you, by the way, to have been interested in inversions-- the very topic I like. Again I leave my sentence for anyone to discover the mistake. For he knows how important it is, Ahmad shall never miss the book he is loving. one mistake |
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