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الكاتب:  Lina [ الأحد سبتمبر 07, 2008 3:01 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Like a dream (for the competition)
 
MoondanceR,
:shock: :shock:
is it written by you???
*good *good
*good *good
اقتباس:
Like a dream..
"pureness" her actual name was..
was lack to describe her actual soul..
*ممم *ممم
I guess I know what is it then :wink: :wink:
اقتباس:
her mercy get
gets :wink:
اقتباس:
Like a dream..
the truth was too much for her to be understood..
understood was my only hope and she pull it off..
pulled I guess
*good *good *good
this is soooooooooo beautiful
*good
اقتباس:
her love chosen by my soul to be its endless food..
I didn't understand this
*ممم
it's sooooooooo beautiful and carries heartfelt meanings
KEEP GOING
*good *good
الكاتب:  سنا [ الأحد سبتمبر 07, 2008 3:26 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Like a dream (for the competition)
 
you are a poet!! i had no idea.. you can make your dream comes true .. just live your life and everything will come true.
الكاتب:  Safwat [ الأحد سبتمبر 07, 2008 6:13 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Like a dream (for the competition)
[english]MoondanceR,

It is a a real poem.
It reflects your noble originality and true love....
you are eager not for love , but for " pureness" love

Ahmad , this is one of the most distinguished poems I read , you are a real hero , you have to be optimistic to win...........[/english]
الكاتب:  Samar [ الاثنين سبتمبر 08, 2008 12:09 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Like a dream (for the competition)
 
MoondanceR,
What a wonderful poem
You have expressed your emotions in a nice way
اقتباس:
what do you think happen after she read the poem?!!
I think she will love you because your feelings are real and faithful . *1
الكاتب:  Hiba.Sh [ الأربعاء سبتمبر 10, 2008 12:22 am ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Like a dream (for the competition)
MoondanceR,

ITS AMAZING

GO AHEAD

*good *good *good *good
الكاتب:  Raghad [ الأربعاء سبتمبر 10, 2008 3:14 am ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Like a dream (for the competition)
 
MoondanceR,
It is so beautiful :wink: and it seems that you expressd your feelings from your heart *ورود

*ورود *ورود
الكاتب:  Yara [ الخميس أكتوبر 09, 2008 4:01 am ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Like a dream (for the competition)
 
MoondanceR,
good job u know ... u did a great job.and the idea of using the same word at the beginning and end of every other line is really great
الكاتب:  Yara [ الخميس أكتوبر 09, 2008 11:24 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Like a dream (for the competition)
 
MoondanceR,
i read it a loooong time ago, but i had a problem with my computer ...that's why it took me a long time to tell u my opinion :wink:
الكاتب:  Odysseus [ الخميس أكتوبر 09, 2008 11:34 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Like a dream (for the competition)
*ورود *ورود *ورود
 
Really great work MoondanceR, Keep on.
God Bless Thee. *1 *1 *1
الكاتب:  Emanism [ الجمعة أكتوبر 10, 2008 5:56 am ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Like a dream (for the competition)
good for u....... *good
it is realy an amazing poem.....
اقتباس:
Like a dream..
I decided to be a fool and tell her the truth..
the truth was my desire to be near her for ever..

Like a dream..
the truth was too much for her to be understood..
understood was my only hope and she pull it off..
:mrgreen:
dontworry it is only her first reaction...........
surely she will love you......

by the way, i envy safa......... :mrgreen:
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