لكل من لديه ملكةَ البوح سواء بالانكليزية أم الفرنسية نفسح المجال لعرض مانكتب و تبادل الرأي و النقد البنّاء .
الجمعة شباط 29, 2008 4:14 م
Funerary Dirge
"Run." A mother shouted in fear to let her son named Omar to run away from death. Omar the 7 years old child, runs away to the jungle. From there, he heard, machine gun, canons and jets' ear-splitting sounds. After less than 22 hours. He came back, trying to find his mother, his family, and his home. He was surprised by murderers dressed uniform, and before he realized what was the matter, a machine gun's bullets exploded his head into pieces, less than a moment later, he saw his mother smiling from the other side, calling, "Omar come here my sweet child."
Finish
الجمعة شباط 29, 2008 5:14 م
الجمعة شباط 29, 2008 5:27 م
الجمعة شباط 29, 2008 5:28 م
A mother shouted in fear to let her son named Omar to run away from death
A mother shouthed in fearto let her son ,named Omar, run away
After"let" put the infinitive without 'to'
From there, he heard,
There is no need to this comma after 'heard'
After less than 22 hours. He came back,
After less than 22 hours , he came back
الجمعة شباط 29, 2008 6:34 م
Saturnine,
What a sad story!!
Thank you lord for the boon of security.
Thank u Saturnine,
السبت آذار 01, 2008 3:18 م
it is a sad and painful story
thanks alot
السبت آذار 01, 2008 3:21 م
What a sad story!!
thanks daer.
الخميس تموز 24, 2008 9:43 ص
Safwatread this story, I wrote it, if it touches you, so I'm a good beginner
الخميس تموز 24, 2008 7:17 م
Saturnine,
Nice language and story...but toooooooooooo short!
الجمعة تموز 25, 2008 9:16 م