An Art... in my Heart

عذراً, يجب أن تسجل من هنا لترى الرابط إذا كنت عضواً, فقط قم بتسجيل الدخول

I have an art in my heart
Saves your joyful name
In every sacred part

It pushes my eyes
To miss your eyes
And to endure its darts

Your beauty never stops
And year by year,
It does not vanish,
Nay , it really starts

When this art meets you
in music,
I know how music is smart

It calls me to take you
To dance beyond imagination
To give you a nation
In which you color the moon
And you color the soul
And you color the stars

Safwat

Fine Safwat

Frankly, the title is musical, and it attracts the reader to know your "Art"…
You've used simple wrods, but they are full of meanings and pictures. You've said "Imagination", this is so effective…do you know why?
Imagination is the best place to live your dreams, and even your values, while the fact kills them… *---

Best regards!

Ranaa,
Thank you sister .

Imagination is the best place to live your dreams, and even your values, while the fact kills them…

It kills them sometimes, but not always . I think that if we put our life in imagination , we will be eternal after life . If we live and lose , it is a dilemma .

Safwat,
you did good job friend . awesome ,wonderful i am proud of you
keep up
best wishes

Do you know what I like in your poems?
The HARMONY!

Keep it up, I really like it.

that is fine but in my opinion you should stand your imagination up and up and up

that is fine but in my opinion you should increase your imagination up and up and up

hatch,

you did good job friend . awesome ,wonderful i am proud of you
keep up
best wishes

Thank you for your lovely words
باسل العمروش,

The HARMONY!

That is because you are accurate bro
سليمان الحسن,

you should increase your imagination up and up and up

I will ...I will make it limitless