الجمعة كانون الأول 25, 2009 4:17 م
Well, here are my first four lines
Emptiness
Like a hero with no power
Like a scentless flower
Like a bird that cannot fly
Like a night with no moon in the sky
I'll do my best to participate whenever the muse comes
Sweet Lies
It did came not fro thy heart.
For thee art known with deceive.
That word to my soul reacheth not.
Afraid are my ears to believe
My Last Wish
For once in a lifetime,
Show me that you care.
That your arms are opened,
And you're really there.
Give me some of your interest,
Some of everything to share.
No Longer a Child
Madness had dissolved
The child inside got old
What left of that story died
Outside. Inside, a shining gold
Dead inside
Delighted love is all you seek
And pure love is all I offer.
Though strong with you, inside I'm meek
I die each night of pain and suffer.
السبت كانون الأول 26, 2009 3:06 ص
This is the First time I know that you have the roots of a poet
I can add a line to yours; "Like Art-en without topics"
Can you specify which Muse you mean please ??
Because as you know, there are nine "muses" - daughters of Zeus -
1- Calliope : Epic Poetry
2- Clio: History
3- Erato: Love Poetry
4- Euterpe: lyric poetry
5- Melpomene: tragedy
6- Polyhymnia: songs of praise to the "gods"
7- Terpsichore: dancing
8- Thalia: comedy
9- Urania: astronomy
الأحد كانون الأول 27, 2009 2:59 م
It did came not fro thy heart.
For thee art known with deceive.
That word to my soul reacheth not.
Afraid are my ears to believe
Nawal, I think you should replace "thee" in the second line with "thou".
The fourth line does not make sense to me!! So what do you mean? I couldn't understand it. I think you can rewrite it in other form so that it can be easier to understanding!!
This consists of more than four lines but nice
Ezra Pound can't write like it You reminded me of this poet
In my view, the best one of these poems is:
اقتباس:
Dead inside
Delighted love is all you seek
And pure love is all I offer.
Though strong with you, inside I'm meek
I die each night of pain and suffer.
Those who say you're not a real poet are lying
الأربعاء كانون الأول 30, 2009 3:28 ص
السبت كانون الثاني 02, 2010 3:52 م
شكراً لك نوال في الحقيقة انا لست من هواة كتابة القصائد أو الشعر في اللغة الانكليزية .. ولكن الواضح بشكل جلي انك مبدعة في الشعر ..
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