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  • Post subject: correct my eassey please...Safwat-Mussalam-Raghad...so on
Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:14 pm 
آرتيني متميّز
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First of all, I know there is many mistkes but please tell me  which is and correct... I ave to hamd it on Tuseday



How we can support the Palestinian people


       The occupation can be consider from one of the worst word that can we hear it and we can find in the Arabic Land which is Palestine that  has been occupied by the Israel Government .so, from our duty about him we should help them by giving them money not only this but also by fighting beside them against the Israel .Beside, by publish the advertisement in television show the suffer of people their and the crimes of the Israeli soldiers.

To help the Palestinian people is and stand with them by giving them money that’s happened. for example, with share of the governments companies like the schools and universities that is there are many schools and universities in our Arab world for example, Damascus and Aleppo universities

There is also another way to help them which is to fighting with them in the war and gives our souls free in the way of Allah and taking the victory by the souls and spoils so with this we can stand with them

Another way to help them is to purplish the Israeli crimes in the media for example, in television and the Internet . and show the suffer of Palestinians in it .

 To sum up, the Palestrina problem and crisis is our main interest that can be remember it in all the day and we have to support them with many ways like fighting with them and giving many and purplish the Israeli crimes in media
    
   
  
 

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  • Post subject: correct my eassey please...Safwat-Mussalam-Raghad...so on
Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 4:38 pm 
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:cry:  :cry:
Where are you??????????????????????

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  • Post subject: correct my eassey please...Safwat-Mussalam-Raghad...so on
Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 10:36 am 
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from one of the worst word
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The occupation can be consider

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the Israel

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To help the Palestinian people is and stand with them by giving them money that’s happened

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hich is to fighting

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o sum up, the Palestrina problem and crisis is our main interest that can be remember it in all the day and we have to support them with many ways like fighting with them and giving many and purplish the Israeli crimes in media





Fadi .u write in Arabic ...........rethink
open ur dic
read more in every field

u r so bad

go one

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