Like a dream

Lina · **مرسل:** الأحد سبتمبر 07, 2008 3:01 pm

MoondanceR,

is it written by you???

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Like a dream..
"pureness" her actual name was..
was lack to describe her actual soul..

I guess I know what is it then

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her mercy get

gets

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Like a dream..
the truth was too much for her to be understood..
understood was my only hope and she pull it off..

pulled I guess

this is soooooooooo beautiful

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her love chosen by my soul to be its endless food..

I didn't understand this

it's sooooooooo beautiful and carries heartfelt meanings
KEEP GOING

سنا · **مرسل:** الأحد سبتمبر 07, 2008 3:26 pm

you are a poet!! i had no idea.. you can make your dream comes true .. just live your life and everything will come true.

Safwat · **مرسل:** الأحد سبتمبر 07, 2008 6:13 pm

[english]MoondanceR,

It is a a real poem.
It reflects your noble originality and true love....
you are eager not for love , but for " pureness" love

Ahmad , this is one of the most distinguished poems I read , you are a real hero , you have to be optimistic to win...........[/english]

Samar · **مرسل:** الاثنين سبتمبر 08, 2008 12:09 pm

MoondanceR,
What a wonderful poem
You have expressed your emotions in a nice way

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what do you think happen after she read the poem?!!

I think she will love you because your feelings are real and faithful .

Hiba.Sh · **مرسل:** الأربعاء سبتمبر 10, 2008 12:22 am

MoondanceR,

ITS AMAZING

GO AHEAD

Raghad · **مرسل:** الأربعاء سبتمبر 10, 2008 3:14 am

MoondanceR,
It is so beautiful

and it seems that you expressd your feelings from your heart

Yara · **مرسل:** الخميس أكتوبر 09, 2008 4:01 am

MoondanceR,
good job u know ... u did a great job.and the idea of using the same word at the beginning and end of every other line is really great

Yara · **مرسل:** الخميس أكتوبر 09, 2008 11:24 pm

MoondanceR,
i read it a loooong time ago, but i had a problem with my computer ...that's why it took me a long time to tell u my opinion

Odysseus · **مرسل:** الخميس أكتوبر 09, 2008 11:34 pm

Really great work MoondanceR, Keep on.
God Bless Thee.

Emanism · **مرسل:** الجمعة أكتوبر 10, 2008 5:56 am

good for u.......

it is realy an amazing poem.....

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Like a dream..
I decided to be a fool and tell her the truth..
the truth was my desire to be near her for ever..

Like a dream..
the truth was too much for her to be understood..
understood was my only hope and she pull it off..

dontworry it is only her first reaction...........
surely she will love you......

by the way, i envy safa.........

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