Citer:
the last word you said
It’s better to say: the last word you’ve said?
Citer:
but I did now
But I have
Citer:
Do you remember the woman you felt angry with ?
That was my mother who care of me
The woman whom you felt angry with
It was my mother who takes care of me.
Citer:
I never care about the country
God save the children
Never mind about countries.
Let God save the children.
Now for
زمردةCiter:
what you said
also, what you've said
Citer:
You could stay and you could go”
It’s better to say: “you could either stay or go”
Citer:
I was angry and I do not realize that..
This is you …O you
Citer:
You are my beloved and I love you from the beginning
I think it’s more expressive to say: “You keep living in my mind despite of children and people”
You are my absolute love, I originally love you.
But don’t think that your translation doesn’t make any sense. It’s good. Go ahead.
Citer:
Where is your brightened smile that makes my life shiny
Where is your bright (fresh) smile which is glorified by the life’s brightness?
Citer:
My mother’s beautiful name have
It’s a deadly mistake….. My mother’s beautiful name has….which is sweeter than the breeze.
Citer:
All I have is your great love
Have I anything but your great love?
This is enough for today
…..I’ll correct the other translations tomorrow. Thanx 4 u
Safwat and
Zomorroda… your translation is good...but I give you other suggestions…and hope they are good.
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