Abo MAnAR,  
First of all, I want to welcome you here between us -I may call us "the writers of art-en"--

I was reading for you , and wanted to tell you that never give up and keep trying until you achieve your goals.

Always remember that "practice leads to perfection"
I wanted to say something about your poem,
-The first thing, which is something they always tell me to do but I don't, is when you write something don't write about personal experience in a very CLEAR way, I think you know what I mean.
-The second thing is the line:

The meaning of this line is understood for us, but if you give your poem to a native speaker he would say: "Do you have a keyboard in your head that tells you how to spell the words you want to say??" or, "Do you usually speak the words letter by letter??"
And what I mean here is that you don't have to know the spelling of the word before you say it, saying a word is much easier than writing it down.
Try to choose a better word.

Wish you the best, good luck.
Keep up the good work.

 
Abo MAnAR,  

I told you, I don't respond to this advice at all, 90% of my writings are personal to the core, but that what they always tell me and so I thought it might help you.


 I also said that for us the meaning is obvious, but for someone who is native, it's not!! it's literally ARABIC!!