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People leave and on life goes

But some like you, they stay because

They are faithful, they are true

And that's what I like in you

Your soul is gentle as the sky is blue

You are an angel, a drop of dew

For you, Dear one, I'll stand and say

My hands are joined I'll implore and pray

May Almighty guard you  from pain

And color you life again and again

So, no matter how far you might be

Just look at the sky and when you see

a falling star from the unknown came

be sure ,then, I mentioned your name


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thanks for the compliment lina  

well it has no rhythm so i guess we cannot call it poetry ; it is more like prose

or a poima "a new kind of poems

thanks Heba  

?you think so



 

قصيدة رائعة انا بهنيك على الاحساس الحلو والرومنسية يلي عندك

thanks heaven for the encouragement, i am really impressed

 

there is no need to be like that dear
the poem is really nice and make us feel about ur feelings twoeards you
friends the good ones
I keep writing because its really nice
yours

oh     my God

great   and i like it  very much