Last Night Inspiration.

Nawal8q

Hello every one, last night I couldn't sleep till 6 a.m. in the morning and to loll myself a little bit, I took my note book and started writing....what I wrote was really silly but I like it, it composes a very nice rhythm , it appeared like a rap song...
Here I would like you to read it...but don't laugh….

It’s only me asking about thee.
How did you find living away from here?
Did you like the weather there or not?
Did it suit you, or it was extremely hot?
Did you love the city? The buildings and the land?
Did you fell in love with it’s desert sand?
How did you find the sun rising behind the sea?
Whom did you imagined there with thee?
Are you going to stay forever in that land?
Did you just slept away from my hand?
How does it feel to see the desert wide?
Did you enjoy reading at the sea side?
Sorry, I didn’t notice that I’m only asking.
Didn’t take a moment revising..
I wish I could tell you about me now,
But this is getting too long as you see.
Maybe next time I’ll be able to tell you.
That I did let go..
And now I’m free.

That’s it….
:mrgreen:

سنا

اقتباس:

Whom did you imagined there with thee?

are you sure you are not an English Literature student!!!

very nice

Nawal8q

سنا,
My frind is half Syrian half American, and she read alot of book...and sometimes she teachs me new words like the old English style of writing..

Osama

Nawal8q,
it very nice ..........specially the ends
land, sand
wide , side

*good

you have to be an English student

Raghad

Nawal8q,
*good

It's really good *ورود

Really the one who doesn't know you ,thinks that you are an excellent student of English :wink:

Go ahead

Nawal8q

Raghad,
Thank you....

Safwat

Really nice ...........

the spontaneous words are the light ones which enlighten the hearts and sometimes the tears .

حلواني

Wow! It's really nice and the words u choose it an english student i think can not do as u do,for this you should be an english student .

Odysseus

*good

Nawal, It is great as you. I really do NOT know what to say, it seems that you like poetry. I'll say what I always say :mrgreen:

, God Bless Thee.
I do NOT know you, but I've formed an image about you. I try to read all what you write in this forum. I really DO respect thee. :mrgreen:

Nawal8q كتب:

It’s only me asking about thee.

, I like to use "thee" instead of "You" so much . . .

Nawal8q كتب:

Did you like the weather there or not?
Did it suit you, or it was extremely hot?

Great Great Great Great

Nawal8q كتب:

Are you going to stay forever in that land?

Did you write this for a real person :mrgreen:

?? Or what?

Nawal8q

Safwat, حلواني, Odysseus,
Thank you all, you are really wonderful... :oops:

اقتباس:

I do NOT know you, but I've formed an image about you. I try to read all what you write in this forum. I really DO respect thee.

thank you .....
I do really respect you too.

اقتباس:

Did you write this for a real person ?? Or what?

or what..

??

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